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[But? OR!?]

Heh

A minor "heh" for you....there's lots of potential here, not a lot of follow through. The "fair enough" ending felt right but it could have used more buildup, and general polish in between.

It IS an amusing premise though, I'll definitely grant you that. I hope you keep working!

[Toad sneek attack]

Heh

I smiled and went "heh," but all in all there's a lot to be added here. For a 2nd sprite movie ever though, I do give major props.

Now: let's see some more sound effects, maybe some more music (to help set the theme of the screaming), possibly some plot/set-up? Those might be some good places to start, I think.

[Change for a Wizard]

Nicely done

An enjoyable experience with a worthwhile ending. The pacing needs improvement - it took a little bit too long with nothing interesting happening. Either less time between action moments, or something else happening, like music, or better animation. Not bad at all for only a single semester, though! Keep up the good work and you're on your way.

[Complex]

Superb

I loved this. I hope you will please consider working on additional entries to this series. The uncertainty of it is what makes it so exciting....I couldn't wait to find out what was real and what was not, or if that distinction even makes sense in this context. Capital stuff!

[TmsT's "Spy & Pyro"]

Great work

There was something ever so slightly lacking here, I can't quite put my finger on it...a few parts were a tiny bit lagging, perhaps? But barring this vague sense, you really had a supreme tribute/parody of the styles you referenced. And the reveal at the end - that Spy + Pyro = Spyro - was absolutely choice. Loved it.

Animation was also an excellent mimic of the Ren and Stimpy style, so congrats!

[Shower Products for Men]

Continuing a tradition

Is this derived from Powerthirst? Obviously.
Is that a bad thing? HELL NO.

That is an amazingly hilarious skit, and you've taken that and run with it to new places - truly excellent work. I especially loved the length; I kept thinking "surely it's over now" and NAOOO~~~! there was more. The animation, in particular, was truly superb - shame-wasting and archaic scythes, the spaceship shave? Aw man, excellent.

Allie sent me, btw. Glad I listened. ^^

[Enjoy Your Heaven]

hehe

Loved the ending, made me really happy. Especially the voices! Capital.

[Goku-KameHameHa]

hmm

I don't know much about the creation of actual flash, but if this is hand-animated like I suspect then I must say it seems a good start.

Perhaps an original character design might be more interesting? Or possibly setting the character on one side of the screen and tracking the Kamehameha wave until it hits something off to the other side?

Fulmetal75 responds:

This is FBF mouse drawn animation.
tracking the Kamehameha wouldve made this better.

[Jack Matthews]

hehehe

I'll admit, I laughed beside myself at this one. Not sure I like seeing the President so shamelessly minstrelized, but I'll focus on the great ludicrous joy of the ROFL gun instead. And really, it was ludicrously joyful, so...yeah. ^^

[Corporate Puppet]

Nice.

Fully agree with previous commenter about the ending.

Took a bit long to get there, I felt; the animation was slower than it needed to be at times. Otherwise, however, I'd say you were dead on. Righteous.